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    Post by Vera Tue Aug 10, 2010 10:20 pm

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Sealed~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
    Name: Sustantivo (repulsion)

    Type: Battle Axe

    Looks:
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    The axe is approximately 3 feet long with the blade span reaching two feet wide. Its a double finned blade set-up symmetrical to one another. the metal is silver in color and the shaft of the blade is black. (for design, look at the picture provided.)


    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Resurreccion~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
    Release Phrase: "Push, Sustantivo"

    Representation: humanoid

    Aspect of Death: Destruction

    Family: Force

    Looks: The only true physical changes to Vera is his right arm. It takes the shape of white round cannon approximately 5 inch's wide in diameter and stretch all the way up to the elbow. His hollow mask consumes the right side of his face in a sleek white mask. The only cut out is for his eye which is in the shape of a horizontal diamond, letting him see.


    Special Ability: Vera's sustantivo fires a beam of pure force from the cannon approximately 4 3/4" in diameter.The power of the beam is as powerful as being hit by something half your weight traveling at 10 mph. (this closely resembles being tackled in a football game.) The speed of the beam however is that of a bala. ( i say bala only because i believe bala slower than Gran Rey)

    Techs: None

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Segunda Etapa~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
    Release Phrase: Break

    Looks: the cannon on his arms from his first release grow to a diameter of 10 inchs. The other arm is now affected with the same cannon equipped. The Hollow mask completely consumes his face now, one side white the other black. Diamond cut-outs for his eyes are the only facial features he has at this point.

    Special Ability:the power of the two arm cannons increase to that of being hit by someone double your weight at 10 mph. (this is roughly the equivalent of being hit by a college football linebacker) this travels now at the speed of a Gran Rey Cero

    Techs:none


    Last edited by Vera on Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:37 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : finishing)
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    Post by Vera Wed Aug 11, 2010 12:10 am

    complete
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    Post by Valintine Wed Aug 11, 2010 12:35 am

    Interesting res...just a few things:

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    Post by Vera Wed Aug 11, 2010 1:44 am

    that ruins the whole thing then... guess im starting anew
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    Post by Vera Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:37 pm

    slightly revised
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    Post by Guest Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:52 pm

    Sure that's all you want?
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    Post by Vera Thu Aug 12, 2010 3:43 pm

    what are you suggesting?
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    Post by Guest Thu Aug 12, 2010 3:44 pm

    Not suggesting anything. Just making sure that is all you want in there.
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    Post by Vera Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:04 pm

    i might add a tech later, but probably not. do u think the power is acceptable or underrated? that was the one thing i wasn't sure how to express
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    Post by Guest Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:32 pm

    Your special ability is fine.
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    Post by Vera Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:59 pm

    If someone undermines it i will just explain it to them, i don't need techs to make this a good res.
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    Post by Guest Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:04 pm

    Suit yourself. Approved.

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