Bleach Broken Chains

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    Natsume

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    zunga


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    Post by zunga Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:09 am

    Name:Natsume unknown
    Alias:

    Gender: Male

    Age: 13

    Visual Age: 14

    Race:vizard

    Sexual Orientation: Straight

    Extra Information: (optional. Things that didn’t go into the other categories would go here)

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Additional Information~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    *This stuff is optional

    Blood Type: A+

    Family Members:All dead

    Birth Date: Febuary 11

    Star Sign:Waterman

    Favorite Food:Pizza

    Least Favorite Food:broccoli

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Appearance~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    General Apperance: He has black hair and black clothes. A short pants and a t-shirt without sleeves. He has black eyes.



    Reiatsu Color: Totally white.

    Height:4foot

    Weight:[unknown]

    Body Type:Skinny but strong.

    Extra Information: (optional. Things that didn’t go into the other categories would go here)

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Persona~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Personality

    Likes: People who are nice for him. Poeple who are good in close combat

    Dislikes: People who hatehim. People who are good in range combat.

    Goals: Come in the 6th division

    Insecurities: non

    Fears:That everyone in soul society him hates.


    Strengths:Shunpo and Zanpakutō

    Weaknesses:Kido Very fast ranged atacks

    Phobias: No

    Extra Information: (optional. Things that didn’t go into the other categories would go here)

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~History~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Addictions: None.

    Withdrawals: None.

    Bio:
    As when he has 6 he had one of the strongest hollow ability's. His father and mother throwed him on the street for that People feared him and shinigami's tried to kill him. He hated shinigami's of that. But once when a shinigami tried to kill him. The shinigami just had to do one blow to finish him. When a quincy attacked him. The quincy then toke ihm to his home. And then he raised him and trained him. But when the quincy knew that he could become a shinigami. As his parents he throwed him away. He survived in the world. And became a shinigami with holopowers.

    Marin
    Marin
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    Natsume Empty Re: Natsume

    Post by Marin Thu Aug 19, 2010 7:34 pm

    Zunga, you need to expand your Bio and Application as a whole. It must include a living section, death section. Each must be 1-2 paragraphs minimum. You Appearance and personality must be expanded as well. And your weight, you have a weight, everyone does.

    In addition I recommend you read the site rules... because you can't start out as a Vizard. You must earn that in play.

    Good luck on your revisions. To reiterate all of the requested revisions must be of a decent quality and length.

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